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June 17, 2012
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Canon
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Canon EOS 550D
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1/512 second
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50 mm
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Date Taken
May 22, 2012, 7:08:00 PM
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Sunshine by YulchaNyan Sunshine by YulchaNyan
I have no idea how to make this photo more interesting.
So you can judge me!
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Your model is fantastic, but the photo is good.

Coming from a non-professional my critic does not go beyond an opinion of one person, to be discarded if you feel like it.

A few things to notice:

The background is incomplete – the wall does not cover the whole space and is not monotonous, so it does not work as the girl against a crude wall theme, one often sees in magazines. It gives no volume, no light, no texture, and screams for replacement.

At this point the reader needs to brace himself as writing anything with a tint of grey about Ksu is a major crime.

Here Ksu parades a bit assets first – models tend to discharge the picture by tilting shoulders, raising one arm and myriads of other little tricks, which ultimately make them … models. In all honesty, the picture should have taken her up to waist, otherwise her braid is cropped – the viewer remains tormented where it ends.

Your comment to the portrait is ironic. Truly, anyone would be hard pressed to make Ksu’s shot more interesting, but there are ways to make it better as a photograph.
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The-Port-of-Riches Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Photogenic!
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Tedebair79 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
those lips! my goodness. yes!
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CreeppingDeath Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awwww, what a gorgeous photograph and the model :love:
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YulchaNyan Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
^_^ thanks!
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derzaknight Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student General Artist
great picture the angle compliment you.
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deviantgrrrls Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
LOVE!!!
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cloud2493 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
simple and beautiful
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Adrolyn Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Goodness. Those are like the prettiest lips on the planet.

More interesting? That probably would require another person walking by in the shot behind you, slightly blurred, preferably looking in your direction.
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YulchaNyan Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
(it's not me)
Thank you ^_^ Another person... Yes) It would be interesting
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Acsher Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
This is an amazing photo! Great job! You have captured so much emtoion and feeling in it (for me, at least). Impressed.
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